I have a good dad。 He doesn’t drink or smoke。 He usually cooks delicious food for me。 But he has a defect， which he is often careless。
One day， he was going to Shanghai in the morning。 He must get there at 9 o’clock。 So he got up earlier than usual。 At 6:30， he drove to Shanghai。 But 10 minutes later， he went back home。 My mum was surprised。 She asked， “What’s wrong with you?” My dad said。 “I’ve left my bag at home。 Have you seen it?” Mum handed the bag to him。 Then he hurried to go downstairs。 Ten seconds later， he knocked at the door again。 My mum opened the door and said angrily， “Why do you come back again? Do you know what the time is now? You’ll be late!” My dad touched his head and said with a smile， “I’m sorry。 I left my keys on the table。” Luckily， he arrived in Shanghai on time。
When I was doing my homework， Mum shouted， “Oh， my god! Your dad’s computer is still on the desk!” Then， a call from Dad rang。
My dad is very careless， isn’t he?
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